Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Free Writing

w.a.l.t use !?. and capital letters correctly

Yersterday after school me and my koro went to kie ewe beach we went down there to fish. we took the motorbike i got to ride around on the motorbike. i went really far and really fast some boy came we had a drag. i bet them because i had a bigger engine. we caught 2 little fish and 1 big fish we caught 1 big eal

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  1. You must start a sentence with a capital. Don't forget. Mrs Larsen

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